Mai Shiranui from King of Fighters, drawn by request from one of the VFS students that met me the other day. I've never played this game and know nothing about any of the characters, so if the costume is a little off........ and I know this one's not that great, but I think I'd like to say.......
Critique me on it. Reasonably. Anything rude will just be ignored, but honest critiques are appreciated.
Thanks. Oh yeah, pencil done in a sketchbook. Couple hours in between video games and general nonsensical fun.
Mai is from King of Fighters, copyright SNK (I think)
hmmm you may want to practice expressions....she seems pretty expressionless,maybe give her a sultry sexy expression.Also i'd say the hand looks a little odd maybe too small,i understand its supposed to look like that from that angle.....hmmm
i would gave you crittics but i have nothing to critic on, her figure looks very good, her hand looks correct"i have always problems with hands"
So to be honest i wouldnt change a thing about it, but if you draw stuff you can always find something to change on your own picture.
but i like your work
keep em comming
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I think you did a great job with the proportions and figure and everything, only thing i would change would maybe be to spice it up a little, not sure exactly how, but just something to make it stand out. Maybe another prop, cool background, or a pattern on her clothes? I don't know, i shouldn't talk, you're way better at the human form and pose than i am, heh
Beautiful Mecha, just beautiful! I love it. And I disagree with shadowssurroundme, I don't think she looks expressionless. I think she looks calm and serene, even regal. Did I mention I love it? Oooh! *gets and idea and runs to your main page with it*
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*nods* I looked up reference pics and she doesn't smile.... doesn't pout either. So I gave her an attractive but straightfaced expression Maybe that didn't work hehe
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i would gave you crittics but i have nothing to critic on, her figure looks very good, her hand looks correct"i have always problems with hands"
So to be honest i wouldnt change a thing about it, but if you draw stuff you can always find something to change on your own picture.
but i like your work
keep em comming
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A story to you I will tell `Tis of a convict's tour to Hell, whose valour had for years been tried, on the highway before i died, like one destined for Satan's fold, so stranger do not troubled me, for you shall have a passage free.
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"The greatest thing you'll ever learn is just to love, and be loved in return." -Moulin Rouge
"Say you’ll share with me one love, one lifetime. Say the word and I will follow you." -Phantom of the Opera
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"Speak softly and carry a big stick; You will go far." -- Theodore Roosevelt
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"Speak softly and carry a big stick; You will go far." -- Theodore Roosevelt
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"Speak softly and carry a big stick; You will go far." -- Theodore Roosevelt
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